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Archive through September 30, 2005

Prodigy: (ooc) Player Discussion: Contest #1 (complete): Archive through September 30, 2005


töff (Töff)

 
Because there is no special skill involved (i.e. you don't have to be able to draw, and you don't have to know computer programming or webdesign etc.) anybody should be able to compete in this contest, with some imagination. OK, I guess imagination and character profile writing are skills ... but still, we all have them enough to make a contest out of it.

I'm not sure what to do about "revised entries" yet. I think maybe you will be limited to the 60-minute window for post editing. So you should be very sure your character is AS GOOD AS YOU CAN MAKE HIM before you post him. And if you suddenly think of a really great improvement 4 days later? What then? I'm not sure.

I suspect the judges might be swayed, if somebody posts a boatload of half-baked weenie characters, to down-judge a good one posted by the same guy later in the contest. So don't post junky stuff just to get "dibs" on some cool idea! No set of rules is perfect, and you can probably find ways to "load the game" in some way or other. But we are not entirely stupid and if we see you pulling a fast one we are likely to squint and grumble and probably not call you a winner even if you put up a very cool character.


Taraqha (Taraqha)

 
ooo i think i'll finish up rocky for this ^^

after all whats cooler for hollowen than a big 15 foot tall monster?


töff (Töff)

 
Of course you are not constrained to making a Halloween character just because the deadline is Halloween. But 15-foot monsters are usually very cool, yeh.

Brings up a question ...

Q. Does my character have to be a superhero?

A. Well no. He she it can be anything you like. But remember, this is a superhero game, after all. Your chances of making a "cool Prodigy character" probably lie within the realm of superheroes and supervillains. But you could make a "normal" or a monster or whatever you thinks is ... well ... cool.


töff (Töff)

 
Q. What are the judges looking for?

A.Coolness is an overall quality, and that's how the three top characters will be ranked to win prizes. Even if #2 has the coolest weapon or origin, #1 might beat him just for being cooler overall. So that's the first thing we are looking for: COOLNESS. It doesn't mean low temperature or calm. It doesn't mean everybody likes him (who liked the Hunchback of Notre Dame? nobody! but he was cool!). It means the most captivating and interesting character profile, taken as a whole--somebody who really grabs your attention and about whom you want to know more. Somebody whose comic book you'd subscribe to, just because he is so cool. Somebody you'd hate to see made into a movie because Hollywood is not cool enough to do this character right.

Probably, given that "overall" approach to judging, each character should have good HOMOGENEITY. He should not looked "patched together" as if you just took the coolest sidekick idea, the coolest vehicle, the coolest top three superpowers, and smashed them all into one write-up. Everything should fit together.

If your character doesn't display at least some kind of ORIGINALITY then you are going to handicap yourself. This might be the greatest challenge, because so many character concepts have already been used, not just in sueprhero comics but in movies, books, fairytales, etc. etc. Batman is cool, right? But making a clone of Batman under a different name is not going to win you this contest. This is not an impossible hurdle to overcome! Just use some imagination. We are all creative people here.

Your character must be compatible with the GAME RULES but that's not difficult because in a superhero game just about anything goes. But still, if you enter somebody with miserably few weaknesses (no freeform balance), you ain't gonna win.

This might sound petty, but you ought at least to write properly in your entry. AOLspeak or 133t or these "u r kewl" styles of writing can be very distracting (some games *ban* that kinda un-grammar). Please run a spellcheck and use correct capitalization and punctuation. Proofread! Revise! Then proofread again! A shoddily-presented entry, even if it is full of cool ideas, will fall lower in the ranks without at least an attempt at standard TYPOGRAPHY. We can forgive your poor American grammarschool educations if yeu c'ant spele, if you misuse since/because or if/whether, and if your past participles sound more like preterites. But you really push your luck if you make us wade through improper English. It will hurt your overall "score." Be forewarned!

I mention this last but it is by no means the least. What good is a hero without DRAMA? You have only 1,500 words, so use them well! That "Origin/History" field might well be your goldmine ... but great potential lies elsewhere too, such as the Personality field. There is enough room within the profile format, at 1,500 words, to create heroism and tragedy and glory and irony. A static character, standing immobile with his cape and his heat-vision ability and his thumb in his butt, is not "cool" at all. Bring your character to life.


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Q. What are the official "profile fields" for this contest?

A.Listed below: they are essentially the current Player Application. HOWEVER ... Note that the Writing Sample field is OPTIONAL in this contest. If you want to use some of your 1,500 words there, go for it. If not, you can leave out that field and concentrate on packing more punch into the others. You can also add fields if you like. The content in any added fields (not the field names) DOES count toward your 1,500-word limit. Possible new fields would be Gear, Nemesis, Sidekick, Affiliation (Superteam), or even such whackdoodle concepts as Legacy or Downfall/Swansong.

* Public Name
* Secret Identity
* Race
* Birthplace
* Age
* Occupation
* Gender
* Moral Standing (Hero, Villain, Oddball)
* Appearance
* Super Powers
* Super Weaknesses
* Abilities (Non-super talents of character)
* Inadequacies (Non-super shortcomings of character)
* Personality
* Origin / History
* Writing Sample (optional)
* Special Fields (optional)


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Q. Can my character be a villain, or be dead?

A.He can be a dead villain. Any gender, species, race ... hey you can enter twins or two-headed characters or a character with no head. He can be good, bad, or anything in between. He can be dead, alive, or anything in between. He just has to be a PRODIGY character! That probably means Megatropolis (founded "as we know it" no earlier than the 18th century, I suppose) but he could have been born/raised at Sri Lanka or Betelgeuse. He might live in orbit and run remote robots in the streets, or he might be four brainlobes in jars at opposite corners of the City Of Supers. Your imagination is not constrained as long as you make a Prodigy character. Sometimes (but not always) the most "out there" ideas are the coolest.


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Q. What if somebody already posted a character that uses my cool idea(s), before I could post my own? I really thought him up myself, honest! but I was still revising proofreading revising!

A. Post him anyway. Just because somebody got that idea on the page first, doesn't mean your own presentation is invalid. The judges, though not omniscient, are at least semiscient. We factor all the factors, not just the posting time.


Administration (Admin)

 
Q. Should I pay any attention at all to the Q&A/comment posts on this page, or is everything I need to know up in the Contest Rules?

A. Um. Heh.


Taraqha (Taraqha)

 
sounds good

just don't like the 1500 word limit...

never good at keeping under word limits

and don't have anything that counts words...lol


töff (Töff)

 
MS Word counts words. What word processor do you have?


töff (Töff)

 
Here are some free word counters (I have not tried any of them):

http://www.download.com/Text-Tally/3000-2079_4-10401004.html
http://www.download.com/AnyCount/3000-2079_4-10317087.html
http://www.download.com/EditPad-Pro/3000-2352_4-10417355.html


töff (Töff)

 
I'll paint the rules updates in blue.


He never misses, The (Marksman)

 
This looks like an excellent idea, and thanks very much for the long "due date" I have some great ideas, but until I can nail this schoolwork (essays, Mid-terms, etc) down, I don't think I would have time to type anything down.

Now, It's definatly possible.

Great idea!


töff (Töff)

 
Yeh well "long due dates" have a malicious way of creeping up behind you and biting you right hard in the ____.


Nero (Goldm2)

 
i hope this doesn't effect ny 1500 words but i got a question. first why are we making a create a chrarchter contest, you hsoudl jsut make somehting in guest forum, no prizes, were you cna judge b4 u send in your chrarcahter stuff. also do i make a new chrachter, or just amke more old one more interesting. last question is i really odn't wnat the prize and if i win this well.. you don't know what will happen in my house. I'm thinking of making a new prize for people who don't really want wayfars. what is that anyway?


töff (Töff)

 
Um. .............O..o

I will try to compose an answer to all that.


Taraqha (Taraqha)

 
oh this would be the guy i said would make a good glutany

gee i wonder why XD


töff (Töff)

 
I can safely say that so far you are in first place in the contest :-) Thanks and good luck!


Taraqha (Taraqha)

 
and i'm sure thats the case so long as i'm the only one =p

lol

I'll probly least the longest one


Sword Saint (Kensei)

 
Were all chars supposed to be posted here or just submitted?


Blue Light Special (Cobalt)

 
Rules say:

quote:

Post your entry here.



töff (Töff)

 
I split the entries out to a subpage. Is that easier?


Nero (Goldm2)

 
i have no use for the prize, my parewnts would kil me if i won and it got mailed to me.


töff (Töff)

 
LOL why!?


Nero (Goldm2)

 
I'd get in ALOT of trouble but, it oculd be sent over by email. I got my own ocmputer and i've made passwords to aces every folder. I'm a security freik. By the way wat is a wayfarar?


töff (Töff)

 
http://wayfarer.mysteryandmagic.com
http://store.mysteryandmagic.com

There is no email version.

Why would you get in trouble? ... for giving out your home address? It can be any valid postal mailing address, a PO box, your parents' work/office, whatever ... even a friend you trust. Is that why you'd get in trouble?

Security is one thing but paralysis is another. It's good to be safe and I endorse that fully. But can't you go shopping online? can't you buy stuff from eBay? You would not be posting your mailing address publicly. You'd be emailing it privately to the MysteryAndMagic.com webmaster (c'est moi), who has shipped a lot of stuff to various people all over the globe, and never taken advantage of anybody's mailing address.


Nero (Goldm2)

 
hmm never thought of it that way. I got a freind who would enjoy reading this. So what do i do just make a superhero or supervillain.


töff (Töff)

 
First you have to win the contest! Yes, make a character profile ... read the contest rules.

Then if you win we'll figure out a way to get you the prize.


Nero (Goldm2)

 
i'm in the process of making the super hero but i'm concerend if the hero is balalnced enough. here's the powers and weaknesses


Super powers: He can shapeshift into anyhting he can imagine. Since he watched Tv often he cna make some pretty wacky things. His favorite things to turn into.

Demon: Has a long nose, wings and is big and red. The demon can blow fire and slash things. the demon cna fly but not very high around 25 feet.

Shadowshift: A imaginary freind when he was a child. It is all black and can stick to walls liek a shadow. Shadowshift can get into your head and confuse you and lower your selfesteam. Shadowshift cna also throw black balls that burn anything under steel.

Cat: an ordinary cat this jsut amuses him.

Super weakness: He cna easily be tricked into doing something. Just make it sound good to him.

He is also afected badly by hot weather above 98 degrees. when too hot he oftens stays at his house or so. If too hot he will nto be able to shape shift and will lose energy rapidly.

Also he cna't shape shift ofr too long he can only go for about 15 minutes before forced to shape back to human.


töff (Töff)

 
I suspect you might not get a lot of feedback on a contest entry. It works against anybody else trying to win a prize. I suspect everybody is on their own ... in this forum, anyway. You could always show your friends, I guess.

As one of the judges, I absolutely must not comment on entries beforehand.


Nero (Goldm2)

 
ah.. well anyoen feel to use that powers as a guideline. I'm more of doing this for fun and i could use this charachter in two months i think.

i just edited this post i had to go into the hardrive btu i found the files.


Taraqha (Taraqha)

 
just a little note....

lol i know i brought up rocky orgenaly becose of the 7DS thing....

but just letting you know i didn't make him becose of it..... I made him like several years ago... 2~4 maybe....

i miss playing him... not tring to take the glutany role ... just wana have fun ^^

hehe besides rocky has BEEN glutany before... the acutaly demonic sin....

lol.... while it was fun rather not go down that rought again....



Besides the deamons that made him a deamon wheren't to happy with the outcome.... they couldn't keep him in check and he keep braking and eating things instead of what they asked him to....... and then he whent off and left to attack some ships and they just called it a lost cause and focused on the other six sins

to much glutany or sloth in there glutany or sloth don't realy make for a good demon... XD

unless you use glutany like an attack dog like on FMA *luaghs*


x.x ok i'm doing the late at night sleepy rambling on and on thing again so i'm going to shut up


Taraqha (Taraqha)

 
one thing i forgot in his app is the chances of rocky ever acutaly being helped of the planet by his people or there alies are a big fat zilch....

and he's to stupid to get off on his own, or probly whant to (there is a lot to eat on earth)

but his people would just kinda forget about him, and the alies well....they never did like rocky.... there is a rather large list of people that tried to kill him.... it's just they gave up.... kinda hard to kill something like rocky and make it look like an acident

best atempt was one guy convinced him if he grew wasp wings he could fly........

anyone that knows even the SLIGHTEST bit about aviation knows to make something as big and heavy as rocky fly your only real options are glidding or a hell of a lot of trust.... thin flapping wings arn't going to cut it unlless there down rigth MASIVE...

so rocky jumps off a building falling a good 400-800 feet...... he barly servived the inpact.... and they where picking up pices of him laying about the courtyard for a week


newage demon (Hellcat)

 
Ooooooooo this seems like an interesting Idea o_O I might just enter this...because...I WANNA T-SHIRT!! *flails arms about* Shirrrrtttt!! I'm definately going to submit something for this ^^


töff (Töff)

 
An email question ...

Q. I know that the contest rules doesnt say we can't draw a pic, but I was wonder if it's... ahh... frowned upon, if I drew a picture of my char instead of a description. I just thought of this after I completed my drawing and the entire profile of my char, which contains exactly 1500 words without an appearance description. I'm just wondering if this will be one of those loopholes you talked about and whether you will "squint and grumble" because of it.?

A. This is a writing contest, and we did not ask for pictures because everybody here can write but not everybody can draw. I considered banning pics on contest entries, because imagery might (um, always does!) tend to increase the "coolness" of the written profile. But I trust in the judges (one of whom is me) to weigh each entry on the text only ... and furthermore I shiver even to think of telling people not to draw! So, I think, go ahead and include pics on your entries, if you like. They will not be considered in the prize judging ... but they might win your the Player Vote :-) who knows!


Anonymous

 
So you're saying that if I put "See picture" or something like that on the Appearance field, you would consider that field as blank, and pretend that my char does not have a description?


töff (Töff)

 
Correct. The picture does not exist for contest purposes.


Anonymous

 
Bugger! *shrug* Meh it's only fair I guess. Anyway, gotta go hack out some unnecessary words/sentences to make some room...


töff (Töff)

 
Maybe we'll have an art contest someday. It might even be "coolest (unretouched) pic from HeroMachine" ... not everybody can draw ... that might be Contest #3 ...

Wayne already has Contest #2 conceptualized. I have some ideas to help out. But it's all a big secret so I'll shut up. Can't give anybody a giant head start!


töff (Töff)

 
Oh cool we got an anonymous entry. How entertaining!

I had a Contest #3 idea and totally forgot it ... oh! I remember! It's a good one :-)


Nero (Goldm2)

 
why don't you insert it then give the grand prize that you win to the runner up


töff (Töff)

 
o..0

wha


Eyes of a tortured soul (Cupid)

 
I think he meant that he wants you to give the grand prize that you win for the 3rd contest to the grand prize winner of this contest and turn the grand prize for this contest to the prize you win if you get second place in this contest... *inhale loudly*